tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4412323614231106444.post5771966821390518244..comments2023-05-03T05:11:54.405-07:00Comments on fairbetty's world: An inspirational momentfairbettyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11641997265787156629noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4412323614231106444.post-72261131349389599862012-03-04T09:06:36.472-08:002012-03-04T09:06:36.472-08:00That's an incredibly cool way to describe it a...That's an incredibly cool way to describe it and fits exactly into the way it is.Susan Gourley/Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02669793865290876168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4412323614231106444.post-30700740378094280372012-03-04T08:11:48.911-08:002012-03-04T08:11:48.911-08:00Amazing quote!!! Thank you so much for sharing. He...Amazing quote!!! Thank you so much for sharing. He captures the process perfectly, the clear moments and the foggy ones.Margo Berendsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03476308235642890474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4412323614231106444.post-69108876626668151642012-03-04T07:44:29.485-08:002012-03-04T07:44:29.485-08:00Wow, Hildred... I didn't even know about the b...Wow, Hildred... I didn't even know about the biblical Lilith... but a quick google search told me a lot. There are some interesting aspects I could use from that character, but no, this one is of my own creation. Although... now I'm intrigued :)<br /><br />Thanks, Rena... I do need practice... and I'm sure a whole scale rewrite is in my future somewhere. What is it they say about drafts? The first one is garbage and the 8th one is ... well, maybe still garbage, hah! I'll get there one day.fairbettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11641997265787156629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4412323614231106444.post-34605761285761287792012-03-04T06:33:42.373-08:002012-03-04T06:33:42.373-08:00Nice Gaiman quote. He sure can turn a good analogy...Nice Gaiman quote. He sure can turn a good analogy. <br /><br />Good luck, stick with it, and the POV changes get easier. You might find that you need more practice in the POV before you get it right for you and your character, but stick with it. Remember that a changing voice is totally normal, and if you have to do a whole scale rewrite, it is not a failure.Renahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02767762370997304308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4412323614231106444.post-65881976740779212162012-03-03T21:35:59.067-08:002012-03-03T21:35:59.067-08:00Is this the Biblical Lilith or some other characte...Is this the Biblical Lilith or some other character? :DHildred Billingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10995415129197042871noreply@blogger.com